06:55:19 pm on January 10, 2013 |
Tuesday Tales WINNER 72!
By entering, every contestant agrees to shamelessly promote and praise the winner on twitter.
For all discussions about this challenge use hash tag #TuesdayTales
Please give a shout out to this week’s Tuesdaytales judge:
Writer from Pennsylvania
@RGraceAllen – Edgy, vivid and wonderfully written. More!
@martieKay – A bit of sadness mixed with a bit of mystery. There’s a great voice to this story.
David A Ludwig
I believe everyone has a story. I have several.
@DavidALudwig – A very grim end for the truest and most noble protectors, but a well-crafted tale for us. In a small amount of words, you created a rich world. I love the image of Pym standing alone amidst the results of his joke unable to believe what happened.
All essence vacated the degenerated shells with the first breeze to crawl over the cracked earth. Pym stood monstrously alone in what an hour ago had been the enclave of the Sun Ascetics. Accusatory pounding of his heart deafened him and threatened to split his head. It wasn’t supposed to be like this.
He was paralyzed by the fear the slightest movement might destroy the shadows of what had been the worlds’ truest and most noble protectors. It was just supposed to be a joke.
The aphrodisiac was meant to loosen them up a bit, not violate their sacred vows.
@DavidALudwigEveryone spread the word of the HMS, the winner @DavidALudwig and HMs @martieKay & @RGraceAllen
Winners you may claim your first chapter edit by sending it to my email stevie(dot)mccoy(at)gmail(dot)com, I look forward to viewing your work!Advertisements