• 03:20:29 pm on February 15, 2012 | 1
    Tags: , , , , , , ,

    Tuesday Tales WINNER 28!


    Challenge #28

     By entering, every contestant agrees to shamelessly promote and praise the winner on twitter.

    For all discussions about this challenge use hash tag #TuesdayTales

    I am happy to have this week’s Tuesdaytales Judgemasters take over:  


    Aspiring Paranormal-Suspense author. She plays with ghosts and monsters, and likes it.
    & Host of #fridaypictureshow flashfiction challenge





    Jonathon Volkmer

    Dream on, but don’t expect them all to come true.

    Jonathon Volkmer, @JonathonVolkmer: I loved the Snow White vibe this story had. Like a true Grimm tale, I sense there was terror at the heart of this story. I kept coming back to it time and time again. Really great writing!


    Lust is a strange thing. Feeding and festering, simple passions can break all bonds of base desire to become something else, something alien. One never knows what will move a man to cupidity.

    Princes, too, are strange. In stories, they are handsome, wealthy, and relentless. By day, they hunt, and kill, and conquer. But what of a Prince’s nights?

    Love, they call it, at first sight.

    Hair as black as ebony offers a place to hide from night’s dreaming torments.

    Lips as red as blood warm the loins with thoughts of slaughtered foemen.

    Skin as white as snow, flawless complexion of a dead girl, offers what no living woman truly can.


    “Bring her.”


    Wakefield Mahon, @WakefieldMahon: This was really well crafted. I liked the way it was laid out simply, but the last line really rung home for me: “Sensing the folly within, she took her own life rather than burden the world, so she lost her life to lucidity.”
    David A. Ludwig, @DavidALudwig: I was immediately drawn in by this narrator, despite his ill-intent. This was a neatly drawn suspense tale all in 100 words. Well done!
    Charitygirlblog, @CharityGirlBlog: This was really well done. She has three well defined characters, a scene that is at once tense and humorous, and great dialog to boot!

    Everyone spread the word of the @JonathonVolkmer and JenD_Author for her awesome judgemastery!

    I would also like to invite our winner Jonathon to be a judge for next Tuesdaytales on February 21st , please let me know if your available 🙂


    You can check out all the rest of the entries of Tuesdaytales week 28 HERE

    OR check out the archive of all the tuesdaytales to escort you to your tuesdaytales needs HERE



  • JonathonVolkmer 3:40 pm on February 15, 2012 | # | Reply

    Muchas gracias! Thanks for the props, and the opportunity to write that little story. I couldn’t have done it without the fantastic combination of word and image provided me.

    Also, I would love to be next week’s judge. Just let me know what I need to do.

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )


Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: