03:20:29 pm on February 15, 2012 |
Tuesday Tales WINNER 28!
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I am happy to have this week’s Tuesdaytales Judgemasters take over:
Jonathon VolkmerDream on, but don’t expect them all to come true.
Jonathon Volkmer, @JonathonVolkmer: I loved the Snow White vibe this story had. Like a true Grimm tale, I sense there was terror at the heart of this story. I kept coming back to it time and time again. Really great writing!
Princes, too, are strange. In stories, they are handsome, wealthy, and relentless. By day, they hunt, and kill, and conquer. But what of a Prince’s nights?
Love, they call it, at first sight.
Hair as black as ebony offers a place to hide from night’s dreaming torments.
Lips as red as blood warm the loins with thoughts of slaughtered foemen.
Skin as white as snow, flawless complexion of a dead girl, offers what no living woman truly can.
Wakefield Mahon, @WakefieldMahon: This was really well crafted. I liked the way it was laid out simply, but the last line really rung home for me: “Sensing the folly within, she took her own life rather than burden the world, so she lost her life to lucidity.”
David A. Ludwig, @DavidALudwig: I was immediately drawn in by this narrator, despite his ill-intent. This was a neatly drawn suspense tale all in 100 words. Well done!
Charitygirlblog, @CharityGirlBlog: This was really well done. She has three well defined characters, a scene that is at once tense and humorous, and great dialog to boot!Everyone spread the word of the @JonathonVolkmer and JenD_Author for her awesome judgemastery!
I would also like to invite our winner Jonathon to be a judge for next Tuesdaytales on February 21st , please let me know if your available 🙂
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