03:18:35 pm on November 16, 2011 |
It is the Tuesday Tales WINNER!
The winner will be bestowed with the AWESOME BLOG BADGE! To be displayed with pride and honor on their blog, twitter pics or what not. Where ever the winner feels their awesome sauce should get the most praise, worship and of course minions.
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This Weeks Tuesday Tales Judge is:
Maggie C McNulty
best twist – @rastrohman
This story is really well set up. With the words “weary-eyed” Ryan instantly characterises his detective and sets our expectations. Subsequently paragraph three is exactly what you would expect from a character like this – only the meaning is entirely different. The twist is completely unexpected, and transforms the meaning of everything that went before. I love it. I particularly like the contrast between “hastate petals pricking him like needles” and the halcyon scene in paragraph one. Really evocative.
greatest sensuality – @andreawalpole
I love the sinister sensuality in the sentence, “The last petal clung to the sepal as he savoured the silken texture between finger and thumb, smooth as the curve of her exposed throat.” It sounds almost poetic, which means the following two sentences sound like the clang of a death knell, which in fact they are. It’s a great combination of sensuality and structure.
Joint Honorable mention: best comedy(s)
I also wanted to highlight @redshirt6 for a masterful blend of comedy and creepiness and @klingorengi for best character name (who couldn’t love a character called Pudge) and sheer comedy encapsulated in the sentence “Never steal something called the Cerulean Blossom of Death?” It made me laugh out loud
Gummy bear aficionado, aspiring author of adult-only pop-up novels & writer of serious dark urban fiction Novella: Counting Down the Storm→ http://t.co/TkM3OR9
Also reknowned for his #3forthursday flashfiction contest in the Week of Flash!
per the judgemaster:
The first sentence of this entry grabbed my attention, the second sentence made me laugh. I love the way the sentence structures emphasise the story: short and sharp when the idea strikes, growing longer and more complex as the idea develops and then more fragmented as his obsession takes hold. The whole story is sublimely well crafted, which is why it’s my winner.
Gerald sat bolt upright with a sudden urge to kill somebody. It was 3:14am, and ludicrous. He went back to sleep.
In the morning the thought was still there. He looked at his wife gnawing on a piece of toast and wondered what would happen if he got up and stuck a steak knife through her heart.
During his forty-five minute commute he obsessed; every driver came with his own recipe for their demise. By the time he reached his office he could think of nothing else. Hastate leaves were killing devices, pencils; spears. Gerald could no longer take it.
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As for A little NANO entry spice Check out this little 100 word excerpt:
“I’m insane for desiring a kiss?” He rested a finger beneath her chin with only the slightest pressure. He stroked her skin, teasing her, knowing what she wanted was for him to cradle her face in his strong hands and bring her mouth to his. “Believe me when I tell you that you wouldn’t wish your worst enemy to Bedlam.” His voice a symphony of emotions; desire, passion, anger, all tumbling over one another.
She was the one who should be in Bedlam. No-one whose knees were shaking the way hers were deserved to be let loose amongst the public.
Nano 100 words