03:00:54 pm on July 8, 2011 |
So, day two of the 7-7-7 flash fiction challenge and we are on to Gluttony. Ohm Nom nom.
In recognition of it being day 2 I have made the flash fiction in 2nd person perspective.
People have told me that I shouldn’t be with you. You’re unhealthy, tart, and dangerous. It’s what I love about you. Even the thought of you being here, in this room, and sitting on my kitchen countertop has my blood boiling with desire. You are bad; you know what happens to bad boys. I’ll caress my cheek against your pale delectable surface. When I feel the slime of your interest against my skin I’ll gather your sugar in my mouth tantalizing my taste buds. Still too distant. I need you in me so I will consume you, Lemon Cake.
(100 words exactly, including the title word: Gluttony)
Again, I must emphasize that we are still at the begining of this wonderful experiment of writing prowess so grab your skittles and start writing!
The most common complaint for most people who desire to be a writer state, “I do not have time to write.” [Sad-face]
Well how long does it take to write 100 words? Very little time indeed, so take off your pen protectors and let the ink fly! [splashing ink noises ensue]
Comment about your Gluttony flash fiction or add a link to where you are participating.
And by popular request I have added Gluttony PART 2:
It’s impossible, really. The fellow couldn’t possibly tan. He is white and well should still be white. What would the crowd think? What would they throw my way when they see him like this? Tomatoes for sure, though that wouldn’t do to help his color, not at ALL! This is truly a disaster. He can’t be the star of the show now.
Look at him just sitting munching that pile of carrots. I can still hear him now, “Ohm nom nom.”
He’s eaten so many he’s practically orange himself.
It’s supposed to be a top hat
And a fluffy white rabbit!
Tomorrow is GREED
Sneak Preview: “The cars and people below all look like bugs no bigger than her pinky.”